"If I have to listen to your voice while I die, there really is no mercy in the world."

I have now embraced the “don’t tell your reader exactly what is going on,” after far too many words of trying to detail everything. I think this is an improvement. It was also motivated by the fact that I have no idea how Sarti stole that speeder. She won’t tell me. 😀

And now Law is panic attacking, and everything is going to hell in a handbasket. Pretty much par for the course! ^_^

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